Sunday, October 24, 2010

falling from grace

with you inside
i sought grace
now falling
to my true self,
i wallow in my sordid desire

9 comments:

  1. Powerful words...you said so much in just a few lines. Beautiful poem!

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  2. Kept me awake way after midnight.

    Please have a good Tuesday.

    daily athens

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  3. To fall to or find the true self I think is everything.

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  4. The last line is quite powerful...love this poem!

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  5. thank you all, its very true to me...didn't know if anyone else would understand :)

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  6. these are haunting words we have all been in this place once in our lives!

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